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I am much ace - story as proof...

feeds@yuku.com (albieee) — Mon, 09 Jun 2008 04:30:11 GMT

Claire

Claire is sat at the small chrome table outside the equally chrome office block. All the buildings are chrome and glass. A thin corner of road sections the square in two. I take the shiny stool next to her and we listen to the construction going on in the next square or two over, just visible between the tops of...

Review my new story bitches

feeds@yuku.com (headsfromspace) — Wed, 02 Apr 2008 15:29:47 GMT

I assembled a new absurdist story. You will read it and comment bitches:

LOVE SPAM

Loving means ramming.

Give your partner loving action.

Pump her over and over again and watch her climax.

No good lovemaking, no problem.

Your banana is too small.

Your girl loves huge cucumber but you have small one.

Do not be unhappy with your small size, we can help.

Amazing lovemaking is now possible.
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Review My Reviews

feeds@yuku.com (oxenjackson) — Thu, 08 Mar 2007 11:18:55 GMT

I don't know what the hell has got into me...

How are my reviews? Are they helpful at all... they are not critiques in the sense but just a general appraisal of the stories. Should I critique them or review them in more detail?

Clear Out Yeer Desk

feeds@yuku.com (owenkilfeather) — Sat, 23 Dec 2006 09:03:25 GMT

I haven't been writing much stories lately, mainly working on longer projects, so I'll post some of a longer project soon. I expect you all have a lovely holiday.

REVIEW LINKS SCREWED MUCHLY

feeds@yuku.com (headsfromspace) — Sat, 02 Dec 2006 10:18:46 GMT

I tried to reach the reviews for November and the link led to reviews for November 2007, for which (obviously) there are none.

So, My Carp, perhaps a tweak is necessary?

NostrumUVA PLEASE STOP

feeds@yuku.com (headsfromspace) — Wed, 29 Nov 2006 15:08:26 GMT

Please stop cluttering the writing page with more chapters of your Pointless Story. This is just me but I find your story pointless and therefore do not want to read anymore of it.

Try letting a few others post stuff and THEN post another chapter if you must. Maybe other people really like it, I couldn't say. I know that there are not a lot of story posts right now but for decency's sake you should restrain yourself anyway.

And congratulations to me for my 200th post. I...

YOUR REVIEW SUCKS

feeds@yuku.com (headsfromspace) — Mon, 25 Sep 2006 06:34:35 GMT

Hi Everybody!

I don't have access to the internet as much these days, so I only get the chance to post once in a while so pay attention cause I'm only going to say this once.

I can't believe Notre Dame beat Michigan State. I mean they were really playing like stale farts in the first half and I must have flipped to something else. I didn't even hear the final score until last night. Oh well. Must've been exciting, huh?

REVIEWS: I've noticed that a number of...

I used to dream in blacks and whites (HELP)

feeds@yuku.com (Christian) — Wed, 26 Jul 2006 12:43:33 GMT

So, I posted this, and in the process of posting it, I tried and break it apart into a poem format but I couldn't get it right. Now it looks all dis-jointed and ugly. Same with "Thin Line" I couldn't break it up just right, they were both written as poems. So anyway... Any suggestions? I can't even read it like that, it's unattractive to read. It reads much better in a poem format. I'd like to edit it, if anyone has any suggestions? Or, I could give you my password and you could...

Who says?

feeds@yuku.com (offbeatjim) — Thu, 29 Jun 2006 21:39:39 GMT

In reviewing Jeffrey S. Callico's story, Stale Brain, Marlouv makes the statement, "Writing just has to conform to stereotypes, unless it is definitive. So here we have a case of a typical person driving a beaten up [truck], but talking in a very expanded, middle-class way, unlike the compressed dialect that would be expected of a [truck] driver."

1. Writing has to conform to stereotypes. Who says it does?

2. A person driving a beat up truck would be expected to...

Drusilla..

feeds@yuku.com (Christian) — Fri, 02 Jun 2006 06:49:23 GMT

Oh Dru.. My Darnell Thomas story.. Indeed, a yawner, a boring 4 minutes of lapsed time inside your skull. Thanks for the review, It seems like you can even make a "This story sucks @#%$" review, sound so beautiful. I just wanted to NOT defend myself, but, explain. The reason for the story and odd phrase or two, mixed in places that seemed they didn't at all belong... Was because most of the phrases and 'F' bombs and etc etc were used by Darnell Thomas in HIS stories. The Tymme...

The Hands of Dr. Mabuse

feeds@yuku.com (headsfromspace) — Thu, 01 Jun 2006 07:21:34 GMT

Just to clear the air about this story, it was the brainchild of Justynn so he deserves the credit for originating it. The things was written a while back, more than a year ago, I think.

We decided to collaborate on it, but the main plot points are his, so if you liked it give him some

K U D O S

won't you?

Congrats to Jon Crater

feeds@yuku.com (headsfromspace) — Thu, 30 Mar 2006 09:36:05 GMT

Are well deserved because you know what he did? He published a story AND wrote a review.

Now if only the rest of the TNA authors (me included!) would only do the same. It would be nice if the number of reviews was closer to the number of stories published, in any given month.

Just to prove to you that I believe in this idea I will go and review a story I really don't like.

the empty head

Reviews Online

feeds@yuku.com (polycarp) — Fri, 17 Mar 2006 06:49:54 GMT

The review system for story feedback is up. Check out this thread:

p201.ezboard.com/fthenewa...=181.topic

For more info

offbeatjim: we love you man, but...

feeds@yuku.com (headsfromspace) — Tue, 14 Mar 2006 14:28:50 GMT

Please don't post 4 and 5 stories at a time. You bump other authors off the front story page and there's just no good reason for it. You're motives may be pristine, but just don't do it no more.

INSTEAD, spend more time editing and having others critique your stories before posting. You could like, have several in development and like, maybe one ready to post at a time.

That way, we wouldn't feel like smashing in your kneecaps with axe handles or something.

WE LOVE...

review: the fate of superheroes

feeds@yuku.com (headsfromspace) — Tue, 14 Mar 2006 13:47:47 GMT

I'm not afraid of being called a suck-up. Fuck all y'all who might think that. I liked Carp's the fate of superheroes and I'll tell you why:

But first I think I should say that I would like it even more if it had been called The Infractors. I mean that shit. 'Cause it was REALLY about the fate of Infractors.

All you new people who are writing short absurd...

lets hear it for marlouv

feeds@yuku.com (Marlouv) — Sun, 12 Mar 2006 21:53:59 GMT

basicly, i have no idea if im good or if i have a defective style.
also, i dont know if anybody else knows the answer.
so, do you know the answer?

Kyle Kucek: Your Stories Suck Donkey Dicks

feeds@yuku.com (headsfromspace) — Wed, 22 Feb 2006 09:34:33 GMT

Hey, man. Sorry to say that your stories fucking suck. These would be fabulous if you posted them at some sex-fetish site, but here at TNA they just reek. I get a picture of a high school kid slathered in vaseline and crouched in his basement breathing real fast.

Accurate?

'TNA story feedback' forum no longer has a purpose

feeds@yuku.com (satan165) — Tue, 14 Feb 2006 03:04:30 GMT

id like to lock it down or just delete it

we have an awesome new way to review stories
its only been used once -- by me!

peep out the reviews section of the site!

Couldn't you change that to "Testicular Rifle?"

I just like the sound of it is all...

polycarp

feeds@yuku.com (Ray Fracalossy) — Mon, 23 Jan 2006 18:41:08 GMT

I recognize those postings. . .
You sent that to me awhile go

glad it's seeing the light of day!